Water colours!

Hi people. How are you today?
This is something I painted with water colours. I’ve joined this water colour painting classes and my teacher hasn’t taught me exactly HOW to paint yet. But ofcourse, since I was too excited, I decided to try it myself. Okay, I didn’t do it completely by myself. I did watch some YouTube videos on how to paint. But that doesn’t count, right? I didn’t find them helpful, anyway.

This is the painting.

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Now, I want you to critically examine this. How is it? Childish? Where should I improve?

37 Comments Add yours

  1. Tejaswi says:

    Hi Shubhada, long time no see 🙂
    Very nice… I am not much of an artist to offer a critical analysis.. I just liked it 🙂
    My useless suggestion, though, would be to study composition.. the concept… like in photography 🙂 The concept of a subject.. a focus… or on the contrary, to look at the larger view.. even if it is merely metaphorical..
    On the other hand, who cares? 😀 Do it for the love of it, even if it sends no message, has no meaning and you do it on a whim.. choose colours from your imagination, even if reality is starkly different, whatever strikes you, from the simple to the bizarre. But, feel it, completely, like in any other art form.. 🙂

    (Caution: I know nothing about art… so take my constipated/(ing?) advice with a pinch of salt and a purgative as well hehe).

    Nice one 🙂

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    1. shubhada says:

      Hi Tejaswi!! Yes, I was (or maybe I still am) on a blogging break. I won’t be much regular here, from now! It’s so nice to know that you noticed I was missing! 💜

      And I loveddddddddddd your suggestion. Absolutely loved it! Thank you!!

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      1. Tejaswi says:

        Oh, why not? Busy with the academics or just fed up with the internet world. I certainly hope not.. I wish you did keep posting from time to time.. Would be nice to hear from you more often 🙂

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      2. shubhada says:

        Both, actually! It’s my Third year in college so it’s an important year. But I’m not that serious about it. I’m kinda bored of the Internet. So I didn’t post or read anything for a while!
        I’ll try to post more often, though, if you like it! 😀 ❤

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  2. The V-Pub says:

    It’s wonderful!! It has an ethereal quality to it, and makes the locale seem exotic.

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    1. shubhada says:

      Thanks Rob! Just something I did randomly! I hope to get better!

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  3. Critical appraisal is a daunting requirement. I’m just going to go ahead and say I really loved this and if this is just the start then I’m excited for what is to come 😀

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    1. shubhada says:

      Oooh, really? I’m so glad. 😀
      Thank you so much!

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  4. izza ifzaal says:

    It’s soo good 🙂
    Wow! !

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    1. shubhada says:

      Thanks izza!! 💜

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  5. hbhatnagar says:

    I’m not painter, nor a critic. My feeling? The shift in the sky from the twilight shades of red and yellows to the blues of night was a little abrupt. Liked the trees though. 🙂

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    1. shubhada says:

      Yes, I agree.. Thanks a lot! 😀

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  6. its beautiful,S! its looking a bit raw but the strokes will improve as u practice more and more! Missing U!
    -S

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    1. shubhada says:

      Yes, the strokes are too raw. This was just a try.. I’ll learn to be better after my teacher shows me how to do it!
      Thanks a lot for the comment!

      And you’ve missed me? Yay! 😛 💝

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      1. of course!…and yes i have really missed you! i have started college and there is so much pressure!!! Even i am not being able to post regularly!
        -S

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      2. shubhada says:

        Yeah! Everything changes after the college starts!! :\

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  7. Dayum!
    You made that,did you!?!!*wide eyes*
    I last painted during my 12th standard board practical.🙈
    It was okay. That’s it.
    This?Fab!!!💜
    And I am seriously not a painter. I draw. But painting seems to ruin it all.
    Anyway,the merging in the background is the technique I generally use while painting a scenic view. I use blue at the top,orangish middle ,yellowish bottom, too.:D
    This actually looks similar to the one I painted in my practical. 😍
    Cooooool.❤❤

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    1. shubhada says:

      Oohh!! You have it? That painting? Show it to me! In your next post!

      And thanks sooo much! 💜 💜
      I’ll get better, this is just a start! 😉 😛

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      1. Hahahahaha no,I don’t. The school people never gave it back. They keep those for records or something. But I will try to paint something similar when I go home this time and then post it,whatsay? But I am not that good.🙈🙈
        Don’t get your expectations so high.:P
        You’re very welcome! 😀
        You already are awesome!❤

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      2. shubhada says:

        YES! Try it and post it!! I’ve never seen your paintings!!

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      3. Hahahaha I am not much of a painter,Ada!🙈
        Don’t have such high expectations.:P

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      4. shubhada says:

        Okay, Okay, I’m not expecting much. But you HAVE to post it now! And notify me when you do!

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      5. Sure thing,girl!:D✌

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  8. shubhada says:

    Oohh!! You have it? That painting? Show it to me! In your next post!

    And thanks sooo much! 💜 💜
    I’ll get better, this is just a start! 😉 😛

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  9. Bobby says:

    Brilliant!! The painting is full of life .. I love the colour in there 🙂

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    1. shubhada says:

      Thanks, bobby!!

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  10. markbialczak says:

    I like it, Shooby Doo. Not childish at all.

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    1. shubhada says:

      Thank you Marky! :*

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      1. markbialczak says:

        Good to hear from you, my Shooby Doo! ❤ Happy holidays. 🙂

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      2. shubhada says:

        Hi Mark! It’s difficult to be a regular blogger. How do you manage that?! 😀

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      3. markbialczak says:

        It’s getting harder and harder to keep up the daily posting and all responsibilites that go with it, Shooby Doo. But I love our connections. ❤

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      4. shubhada says:

        I love them, too! 💜

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    2. shubhada says:

      Thank you Mark! I’m sorry I couldn’t reply sooner! 😦

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